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Literary Vibes - Edition CXIV (25-Feb-2022) - YOUNG MAGIC


Title : Gaia 3  (Picture courtesy Ms. Latha Prem Sakya)

 


Table of Contents :: YOUNG MAGIC

01) Trishna Sahoo 
     IGNIGHTED MINDS 
02) Ritika Pradhan
     A MEMORABLE DARK NIGHT 
 

 


 

IGNIGHTED MINDS

Trishna Sahoo

 

" Why did you choose this club ?" Asked my teacher,

In the last club class, at the fag end of the year.

 

The nomenclature was resounding,

The mentors are positive and motivating.

 

The club is my second home, away from home,

The mentors care me  as good as my mom.

 

It's a disciplined team, we are her members,

All loving teachers are our team's leaders.

 

Opportunities are plenty, foundation is strong,

We learn to set and achieve our goals as much as we long.

 

At the outset I was a bit shy and  nervous ,

But at the end my achievements were marvelous.

 

My concluding words, " If my club is an ocean, I am a river. "

I recited the poem, Khalil Gibran's FEAR.

 

Wow! Everyone stood up and clapped,

Unknowingly on my cheeks,few drops of tear rolled .

 

Surprisingly nobody knew my club, till the end,

It's IGNIGHTED MINDS, my dear friends.

 

Dedicated to my teachers and club members of IGNIGHTED MINDS of SAI INTERNATIONAL SCHOOL, BHUBANESWAR.

Trishna  ( Natuni ) , a class V student of Sai International School Bhubaneswar, born to engineer parents and doctor grand parents is a gifted child. A disciplined and determined learner she is, as a student, family member, speaker, writer and an Odisi dancer. She is blended with traditional and cultural values, spirituality, science and arts. A nature loving girl she has taken reading books and travelling as her hobbies. Her favourite dish is Chicken Biryiani prepared by her mother. Her motto of life is, " NEVER BE A DEFAULTER. " May God bless her.

 


 

A MEMORABLE DARK NIGHT

Ritika Pradhan

 

It was a dark night,

With a faint  dim  light .

There was a lady  sitting beside,

She was loving and polite,

She asked me to light a light.

 

We saw a bird uttering a word,

It suddenly vanished with a thud .

 

I saw a magic flower,

Growing and growing in an hour .

I saw some grass ,

Watered by a man with a loud laugh.

 

To show this poem I ran to my mom ,

She was busy with my bro and said "No."

I met my friend who read my poem,

Wow! What a surprise! Wonderful rhyme .

 

Both of us sang the song with a loud scream

A violent shake from my mother, broke my dream.

 

Ritika Pradhan (Khushi), is a class V student at Pune. Born to a software engineer father and a homemaker mother (a Post graduate in Economics), she hails from Deogarh District of Odisha. Her hobbies include dancing, painting, sketch drawing, reading/writing stories & poems. Recipient of many  awards on dance, creative writing & running competition in her school, now a days she is more interested on getting ideas from elders to fulfil her dream of becoming a  Space Scientist-cum-Astronomer. Her favourite thought is, "Life is like riding a bicycle, to keep balance you need to move forward."  

 


 

 

 

 


Viewers Comments


  • Sneha Chatterjee

    Wonderful poem by Trishna! Keep writing such wonderful poems for your readers!

    Mar, 23, 2022
  • Ruchi

    IGNIGHTED MINDS By dear trishna and ritika is inspiration for many school children to develop and express the emotions in writing .you both have bright future with a very supportive loving and caring parents and grand parents . Keep it up god bless you .

    Mar, 23, 2022
  • Varsha Bhuyan

    Congratulations Trishna for your dynamic literary skill. Putting small memorable moments ,framing into poems of enuthiastic attitude,courage ,energetic at every field curricular and co-curricular activities at school level. The basic need for a all round development of every human. This would encourage many of your fellow mate and parents to cooperate ,support for a wholistic personality of future generations. I can surely say ,a child having such vision ,impactive write ups can bring glory to family and nation as well. Creative piece to bring inspiration in others.

    Mar, 22, 2022
  • Dr P Rajkumari

    Keep up your writing skills little champs! Well done!!

    Mar, 19, 2022
  • Nitu Mishra

    Both the young talents are outstanding.... I wonder at the choice of words and rhyming and the emotions in their work.... Happy for them and congratulate their parents for having such talented kids.... keep it up Trishna and Ritika.... Great job

    Mar, 17, 2022
  • Akshara Rai

    Wonderful poems by both the creative young minds Trishna and ritika. Long way to go!!

    Mar, 16, 2022
  • Soumana Mukherjee

    The Ignited Minds written by our dear Trishna is wonderful. The talent of her is really appreciable. May The Almighty shower his blessings on her.

    Mar, 16, 2022
  • Monalisa pal

    Well done Trishna...Ignited minds you have expressed so beautifully..words will fall short if I try to praise your vocabulary skills..God bless little champ . I am waiting to read more such articles from you .from Monalisa aunty..

    Mar, 16, 2022
  • Dr Pratibha Jena

    Really wonderful poems by so young talented minds ..way to go.

    Mar, 10, 2022
  • debashree pradhan

    one of the best poem i cld connect??. such a wowonderful poem from such a young age??keep growing??????

    Mar, 06, 2022
  • Akshaya Kumar Pradhan, Chief Engineer, PMGSY, Rural Development Department, Government of Odisha

    Really wonderful capacity of grasping and presenting the situation in a magnificent manner by both the young poets Trishna and Ritika. I am wondering and comparing my standard of understanding a situation at their age, how far and great heights they have achieved. I pray Goddess Saraswati to bless these little Angels with all Her grace. Stay blissful and smart yet disciplined through out your journey.

    Mar, 06, 2022
  • Dr Gangadhar Sahoo Dean IMS and SUM Hospital Bhubaneswar.

    Wonderful creations by two young minds. Both the girls of contemporary age have shown their talents as IGNIGHTED MINDS and CREATIVE MINDS.May God bless you both. Keep up your writing habit .

    Mar, 02, 2022

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